Doug
Rice hears voices in his head. But before drawing conclusions about his state
of mind, you need to know that the voices are from characters in his next book.
Rice, a professor
in the English Department and author of three published novels including Skin
Prayer and Blood of Mugwump, says his writing process starts with a single
character saying a single line. In one instant, he knows the nature and complexities
of his novel’s protagonist. “By the time the character has uttered
the first sentence, I know its entire life story,” says Rice.
For Rice, character
development comes ahead of a storyline. “When I start to write a novel,
I don’t know what the book will be about. I put the character in a situation
that causes complications in his or her life and sit back and watch how the
individual behaves in that particular situation.” He also does his level
best to strike minutia from the story. “In our everyday lives, we don’t
go home and bore our partners with every single detail of the day. I don’t
do that when I write either. I include in the story the moments that matter,
because those are the instances that change who my characters are as people.
“It’s
impossible to know what the story’s beginning, middle and ending is going
to be for these people. The root of the word ‘read’ means ‘to
pick up along the way.’ So that’s how I write. The character’s
personality dictates what’s coming up next.”
And what if he
runs into a boring character or situation? “Luckily, art isn’t exactly
like life,” says Rice. “I get to orchestrate what happens, so if
I find my character in a situation that doesn’t matter, I can ‘fast
forward’ through that and move on to something more significant.”
And Rice puts his
money where his mouth is—wasting the reader’s time with an irrelevant
scene is something he avoids at all costs. “There was a scene in one of
my books where two characters were sitting under a dogwood tree, and it was
important to the story, although I wasn’t sure why,” Rice explains.
“I wrote 15 drafts of the same scene before I realized why it was important.”
The moral to the
story, Rice learned, was that not everything is idea-driven. His goal was to
write “inside the details,” because that was how his stories were
ultimately guided.
So how does Rice
know when a story is finished? “Total exhaustion,” he says. “I
know when I’ve pushed a story as far as it can go. When I get to the point
of suffocation, there isn’t any language left in me to tell the story.”
He adds that the ends of his novels never tell the whole story. “I want
the readers to be able to provide their own ending,” he says. “That
way, the story doesn’t just belong to me. It belongs to the reader as
well.”
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