110J Editing FINAL 

 

 

1. Essay two talks about her own point of view in her essay, Greenfield doesn't generalize her argument for everyone.  

 

2 She also compromises both sides of the argument. 

 

3. Klein's thesis is not supported consistently throughout the essay either. Nor does he also compromise with the other side.  

 

4. She makes her point clear by talking in the first person. 

 

5. She explains how she changed her view about animal testing and how she views the topic now. 

 

6. But she also mentions that other people will have different opinions on the subject matter and doesn't critique people who have a different opinion from hers. 

 

7. Kline makes it seems as if animal testing was not too much of a big deal and that testing is worth it, "Life is often cruel both to animals and human beings" he writes. 

 

8. Greenfield supports her thesis through out the essay. 

 

9. She argues that "the animal-rights people have begun to get to her." 

 

10. She says that it is important to find cures for sicknesses, but only to a certain limit she feels animal testing is necessary. 

 

11. After reading Kushman's article I have concluded that Kushman felt that Walt Disney did not succeed in their attempt to "reconcile western culture's with 1990s sensibilities", to a certain point I agree with Kushman's conclusion of the movie.  

 

12. I do feel that the attempt at the multiracial cast was a success, because it does open the vision of this story being met for anyone.  

 

13. The purpose is to look beyond these difference, and if you can't than just remember that this is all make-believe.  

 

14. One of these points is where the "prince insists that he wants to marry someone who he can talk to and share his life with", and then Kushman comments on the ballroom full of beautiful women that are willing to marry just because he is the prince.  

 

15. The prince requests from his valet Lionel to speed the introductions up in order for this to get finished as soon as possible.  

 

16. It is then that everyone in the ballroom is drawn to the top of the stairs where a late arriving guest stands. 

 

17. Which brings up another Kushman point, that is Cinderella does not seem able to attend the ball without the help of "some outside force." 

 

 

18. Who is to say that we don't have something special within us that allows magical things to happen around us. 

 

19. As Kushman states it is as if that when the magic expires at midnight it seems as if she has lost the power within her.  

 

20. If Disney had started with a whole new script than I think it would have been easier for them to change the contradictions that Kushman comments on in his article.